Research log 4

I have found some interesting pictures to support my arguments and ideas and I have make them fit in my paragraph. I almost finished my paper and I think it contain many information of video games and the disadvantages of video games. So, I may don't talk about the advantages of video games in my essay. I have talked about the background of video games, the video games addiction, the violent video games and the events of video games addiction. I also found some very terrible consequence of video games addiction. I made some small title for each paragraph to help me easy to make the structure of the essay be clearly. I am looking forward the comments of my first draft.